Song Sparrows

[Allen_Brooks]

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Description

If I had dollar for every Song Sparrow photo I’ve taken . . . I like the singing poses of 1 and 3 and the environmental aspect of the second.

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Any thoughts appreciated.

Technical Details

Canon R5 and 100-500 mm lens.

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[Dennis_Plank]

Very nice, Allen. I like all three with the last, I think, being my favorite.

[David_Schoen]

Allen

Very nice series. Last one is also my favorite.
Always nice to get a singing sparrow.

David

[glennie (Glenys Passier)]

Oh! I’m really liking the first image! The angular perch is so unusual. It works a treat against the bird’s rotund form You’ve captured the bird in a great singing pose. And, you couldn’t get a much better colour palette.

The other images are lovely as well.

[Jim_Gavin]

No. 1 for me, too. She (?) seems to be inviting a companion to occupy that extra perch.

[Peter_Morrissey (Peter J. Morrissey)]

Hi Allen
These are nice, but the first photograph could be entered into any Birding Book.
Peter

[Jim_Zablotny]

Sparrows are my favorite songbirds because they are mainly brown, but are very photogenic. First one is my favorite with that perfect BG with the subject posed perfectly. I have no nits for you and like this one as presented…Jim