A late bloomer

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By late June, most of the cactus around here are through blooming. Yesterday I was surprised to find one that was just getting around to it.

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For some reason I had a hard time getting a color balance I was comfortable with. Do the colors bother anyone?

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ISO 200, 300mm, f/11, 1/6th sec.

I added a softening layer in Photoshop…what some people call an Orton layer, although it doesn’t really duplicate the Orton effect.


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Colors don’t bother me, but then I don’t know what they were like - these seem plausible and remind me of some Columbine cultivars. The angle and magnification is really nice - lots of depth and soft light. I wish that there was a tiny bit more room on the left or that the light petal was cut off more solidly instead of touching the edge. There is a lot of banding and pixelization in the background that I’m not sure of the cause. And I wonder about bringing up some detail in the yellow parts if possible.

I love the point of view in this image and the depth of field, Don. The center of the flower has a very interesting look-almost like two blooms. I"m not sure if it’s the same thing @Kris_Smith was mentioning or not, but the edges of some of the background petals have an odd fringe that doesn’t seem to go with the softness of the rest-I suspect a bit of blending or blurring would take care of it. I downloaded your image and circled the spots I’m referring to.

Kristen, Dennis, thanks. You’re both right about the edges in the background. I did what I could to fix them in this revision. I don’t know what the best fix is.

I really like what you did here, Don. They blend in perfectly now.

Thanks, Dennis. Their job is not to be noticeable so blending in is the right outcome.

Don: I especially like your DOF choice and management of this beautiful flower. I’ve developed a love affair with cactus flowers and succulents so this is a treat. Your revisions make a fine image even better. >=))>

Thanks, Bill. I share your affection for succulents. :slight_smile:

This is a great perspective on this bloom! I like what Dennis suggested and your edited image is lovely. I think the darker pinks could be a bit softer, but it is nice as it is. Nice work!

Thanks, Paul.

I love the colors because they are counter-balancing each other: red, pink and of course, the yellows. Excellent composition too, not too much and not too little. Wish I had taken this frankly.

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