Australian Magpie

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Te Anau, South Island, New Zealand
The Australian magpie is a passerine native to Australia and southern New Guinea.
It’s quite common in New Zealand, but difficult to catch as it is very skittish.

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Sony A1 II
200-600 @ 600 mg
Date Taken: 2025-04-04 20:19:54
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/10
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 1250
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV


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I have a family of maggies visit everyday. They sit on our back deck and warble the most beautiful songs. I would never have thought they were skittish.

You’ve mangaged to capture the birds’ beautiful black and white patterns. It’s a lovely dynamic pose.
There’s a few blocky blacks, that could be easily fixed.

Sandy: very good capture as all the patterning of the bird is on full display.

Cool landing pose, Sandy. It really shows of the plumage as @Richard_Sandor mentioned. I suspect the degree of skittishness depends on how they’ve been treated historically.

I like the BW patterns present and my only suggestion is to try to pull some more details from blacks of the wings. Very dynamic look and you captured the motion perfectly…Jim

HI Sandy
I am loving the interest birds you are showing us. The Magpie is well framed and has good control of the whites, it just looks a little soft on my IMac.
Peter

Hi Sandy, really nice pose you captured. Love the spread wings. Looks great against the green. Nice exposure too. Bird looks a bit soft to me.

@Dennis_Plank @Allen_Sparks @glennie @Peter_Morrissey @Jim_Zablotny @Richard_Sandor
Thanks, people - detail and sharpening added and re-posted.
My computer croaked and I had to buy another one in NZ (thank God for good exchange rates) and I’m still trying to get it calibrated and set up with the PS/editing programs. ick.

Great job on the repost, Sandy.

Good job Sandy!