Autumn Wren

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Description

This little Bewick’s wren was scurrying among the fallen leaves, looking for bugs.
Poulsbo, WA this last week at Jim’s daughter’s

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all comments welcome
Does the unconventional crop work ?

Technical Details

Sony A1
200-600 @ 600
Exposure Time: 1/500 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 5000
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Spot
Exposure Bias: -0.33 EV
Flash: No flash

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I’m on my cell phone this week. That said, this is excellent Sandy. I love the Fall theme here. The fallen leaves, the soft brown earth. The wren looks tack sharp with great colors and a wonderful look. Nice work.

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Good catch, Sandy. These don’t hold still for long. Nice detail in the wren and the whites look very good. I also like the setting.

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Very nice Sandy. Love the fall looking scene and the overall setting just says “wren”. Nice details and exposure. Reminds me of the winter wrens we get down here in the winter months.

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Just a delightful little wren Sandy! Great detail in her soft feathers, & I like the slight tilt of her head. I think the crop works really well - her positioning above the pile of leaves give me the impression that she’s about to jump into them & rustle around like a little kid.

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Cute little guy. Good pose and detail and I like the fall/environmental aspect and the warm color palette. Great capture of a bird that doesn’t stay in one place very long.