Beach Balls

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Description

Wind swept sand patterns on the Oregon Coast. Every time I visit, the palette has been erased and new art created.

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Any feedback is appreciated.

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1/80 sec. @ f6.3, ISO 200


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Chris,

Oh My! This is fantastic! Immediately having a hard time trying to express what my impression is, or how many cool adjectives I can use… :slight_smile:

My first thought is, are these really little balls on the sand - as in 3-dimensional? or are they just 2-dimensional patterns in the sand? It’s quite the optical illusion if it’s the latter.

Second impression was that of a micro photograph - as in underneath a microscope; you know, like molds or something.

This is just really cool and a wonderful capture. The b&w processing really makes all the textures come through.

I love this!

And you’re so right about this being a fleeting moment; the wind or water will disperse of this quickly and who knows what nature will create next.

Lon

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Very cool patterns, Chris. I’ve never seen this phenomenon and it’s interesting to try to speculate on how those “balls” were formed. Sand patterns are so ephemeral and so complex that there is always something new when you visit the beach. I know I can never resist looking for them.

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@Lon_Overacker Thank you very much for your wonderful, expressive feedback!

@Dennis_Plank Thank you, Dennis. Nature is such a great artist.

Sure it is somehow a photo of sand, but the “What else it is” is the terrific part. Once I stopped thinking about how the balls came to appear, I relaxed and enjoyed the bright line coming down from the left until it bounced off the lower ball and met the chevron which went up to the right and climbed up the upper ball. Maybe I am easily entertained today, but this really hits the spot. I appreciate the graininess of the scene.

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@Dick_Knudson I’m so glad you like it. Thanks for you comments.

I am really enjoying the energy in this composition. The patterns in the sand remind me of ship wakes. It’s as if the objects are being propelled through the image. The diagonal line adds to the dynamics of the scene and helps with the balance as well as leading the eye. There is also the fine curved line between the subjects implying a subtle connection. A very successful abstract with a lot going on to keep the viewer engaged.

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@Paul_Dileanis Thank you for your great, descriptive comments.

Very interesting image. The Tone and the Movement is really good … A beautiful image in B&W…

@Gill_Vanderlip Thank you.

This is so cool Chris. Nice eye to find and film this.

@Ed_Williams Thank you.

Fascinating image. What are you looking at? I love the sharpnes, details and monochrome color. I love the composition and lightning. Well done.