The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.
About This Image
These images were taken last Thursday as I returned once again to the state park pond. This kingfisher came fairly close and then took a dive. He came up with a fish and then turned to head to his favorite perch.
Feedback Requested
I’ve been wanting a shot like this for quite some time of a kingfisher rising out of the water with a fish in the mouth so I’m pretty happy to get this series. I think the separation of the bird versus water would be better if the wind hadn’t kicked up some waves that morning. I was shooting at 30 frames per second and got these shots before the bird fully turned away from me.
I’m wondering about the overall effectiveness of these images given the angle of the bird and the separation from the water. I’m pretty pleased but still see areas for a better shot. My favorite is the second shot with the sweeping wings out front.
Any thoughts appreciated.
Technical Details
Camera: Canon EOS R7
Lens: RF200-800mm F6.3-9 IS USM
Focal length: 800mm
Shutter speed: 1/6400s
Aperture: f/10
ISO: 1600
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Processed in DXO Pure Raw 4 and Photoshop.



