Chapter One +Rework

Rework

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

The tree stands, baring its history in a quiet display of unraveling layers. Like the delicate start of a new entry in an age-old diary, it offers a glimpse into the passage of seasons it has stood witness to. With each peeled-back strip, a story of survival and growth is silently told, marking the simple, profound commencement of nature’s journal.

Specific Feedback

Any feedback welcome

Technical Details

138 mm at ISO 100 and 1⁄100sec at ƒ/5.6

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Great title, caption, and image Saundie! I see ripped pages of an old book marking the passage of time. The black and white edit works well with the subject. The image has depth to it and many details that keep me interested. Awesome work here!

I agree with @Alfredo_Mora especially the B/W and depth and detail. If anything, perhaps remove the small protuberance in LLC by your name. Excellent image.

@Alfredo_Mora @Jim_Gavin

Thanks for the feedback, I have removed that protuberance in LLC, thanks for pointing that out. :+1:

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