Color in Paradise

I spent an afternoon during the height of the pandemic lockdown doing macro photography of Bird of Paradise in my backyard. I tried straight macro, ICM and some out of focus shots like this one. I like the contrasting colors and flow.

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I always appreciate suggestions for improvement.

Technical Details

1/100", f/2.8, ISO 200, 100mm macro lens on tripod. Adjusted highlights, shadows, whites, clarity and dehaze in Lightroom.

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Hi Bill. Thanks for posting. A very colourful image. Based on the composition you have chosen I would make a couple of slight alterations. The top left-hand corner to me is a little overpowering with the vibrance of the yellow. I would tone this down a little and produce a tighter crop reducing the amount of yellow visible. On the bottom right you have a light out-of-focus band which I would try to remove by cropping above. I have tried this very roughly myself to see the appearance and in my opinion, looked better balanced! Just a thought!

Thanks for those suggestions, Robert. I will try them.