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IPhone images, cropped. I enhanced the rust brown colors slightly.
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I’m trying to create images and frame them in a way that can that will work as Wall Art.
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Wow. This is so cool. My first reaction was that I’m looking at a stained glass window. By that I mean that the image is illuminated from behind it like a color slide. Much of the beauty here is in the presentation but the images themselves are even greater. They’re really leaf litter abstracts but they’re close enough that they belong together and different enough to be unique. The left one is a bit different in that the other two are more about sharp angles and the left has different forms. Just excellent work.
Curtis, the presentation as a tryptich looks very good, where the black surroundings do create a sense of stained glass. The three are both different and similar enough to work well together. My one minor nit is that there’s a line very near the left edge where the leaves go from low to high and ruffled. To me that line seems redundant to the black frame. Is it possible to shift that image a bit to the left?
What a great idea to make a triptyk on this weeks theme! Wonderful images, but I might have organized themdifferently. Although not quite sure what way is best. Maybe swap nr 1 and 2??
But I love the colors, the texture and the light!
Thanks. Piecing the triptyk together was like playing three-card Monte – and of course I liked all combinations, so it is nice to hear a note from the outside.
