"Cosmic Feather"

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

Out walking and saw this in my vision. It is how i felt in the moment. For Fun and see if I could change the entire perspective … This is one image .. I didn’t make a composite or anything adding images together …

Specific Feedback

This could go many ways. No cropping.. This is I how I saw it when I started editing. To make a new image from everyday things we may see. Just make my vision come to life. For better or worse…

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ISO 640 SS 640 f11 edit in photoshop.


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Veeeeery cool!! Floating feathers are a wonderful genre! The speckles and the mysterious shapes near the bottom give it a mysterious location. I could see a twofer with a crop of about 1/3 off the right.

Thanks. I left the light in right as a light source. I think it really interesting to see something floating and turn it into some unusual image. For Me. This is a Fun Shot. Like an album LP cover. Just see it in the Album bin and wonder what music could this be. Maybe I’ll do something like that with the image. Stick some weird progressive music to it.

:folded_hands::globe_showing_americas::folded_hands:

Music to Accompany a Floating Feather! Post it when it’s done!

Lovely. The tones and textures are wonderful. I agree with a crop from the right but only slight in order to get that feather centered. It feels just slightly off-kilter to me. I imagine it would be minor enough to still retain some of the glow in the lower corner.

This is pretty cool, Gill. I can certainly see the outer space feel in it and having recently shot at our local duck pond the image speaks to me.