Cosmos

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Yellow cosmos sway,
Raindrops dance on petals bright,
Nature’s gentle sigh.

Specific Feedback

Critiques and syggestions welcome

Technical Details

Sony A1
70-200 @180
F2.8
1/500
ISO 1200
Matrix
Manual with focus peaking
PS 25 +DxO Pure Raw 5
Several badly OOF raindrops on the petals removed.

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Sandy: Beautiful artistic presentation of this beautiful flower and scene. The various bokeh are really nice supporting elements. Top notch shot. >=))>

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Sandy, this is a so well made Haiku telling the whole story. By a well made image. All beautiful !!

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Beautifully done, Sandy. My analytical mind is trying to figure out how those two drops can be in such crisp focus with the petals around them being out of focus, but my artistic side is just enjoying it.

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Dennis, A little selective sharpening and blurring works wonders!

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Sandy,

A beautiful piece of art.