Bill_Fach
(Bill Fach)
November 28, 2024, 7:51pm
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Description
Not quite looking right at me but I liked the pose and the light.
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Is the twig/leaves near his head too much of a distraction? Trying to decide if I should do some heroics to remove them.
Technical Details
Sony A77II
Sony 70-400 G @ 280mm
ISO 400, 1/80 @ f8
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Excellent job getting the focus where it needs to be, Bill. The leaves don’t bother me a bit.
SandyR-B
(Sandy Richards-Brown)
November 29, 2024, 2:54am
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Bill, nice perspective on this fellow. This is an odd position of that right leg;
I wonder if it is hurt? Nice detail and great eye too
Bill_Fach
(Bill Fach)
November 29, 2024, 4:06am
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Sandy Richards-Brown:
I wonder if it is hurt?
Sandy: I don’t think so. He just was stretching. He had a normal grip on the branch most of the time.
Hi Bill, another fine catch of this beauty. Lighting on the bird looks good to me with enough lighting on the eye to even make out the pupil. We have these in my neighborhood and they are always a thrill to see. Glad you got a special opportunity with this one.