Egret with fish

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Dennis:

I hope this is a little better. Please let me know what you think.

David, thanks a lot.

Whoops, the water is still too blue…

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The blue water looks ok to me, David. The whites in the egret are much better in this version.

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Dennis:

Thanks a lot for the follow up. This time what I did was to isolate the bird by selecting it. I made my changes on the original and kept the original water. The first time I tried this, the water was too iridescent.

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Dennis:

Thanks for the feedback. This time I selected out the bird and just made the adjustments to the bird and not the water.

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Nice repost David. Whites do look better.