Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I caught this handsome northern flicker in the rain recently.
Specific Feedback
Too tightly cropped? Anything?
Technical Details
Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, f 8.5, 780mm, ISO 35600, cropped to 2472 x 2873,
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Nice catch of this guy, Dave. I could see a little more canvas top and bottom if there’s not too much ugly stuff. I do see a hint of color change in the upper right implying that there’s something up there that might mess with the composition.
Wow, love all the detail in this image Dave. The light is really nice, probably thanks to the cloud cover and the rain drops do add some interest. Very nice blurry BG makes him stand out too. Crop? I could wish for a little bit more on the bottom mostly.
Nice look at the flicker, Dave. It does look a bit bedraggled and the rain drops add to the story. I could also see a bit more canvas top and bottom.
Hi Dave
I like the framing, eye contact and feather detail. The rain puts this photograph into a nature story. Nice work.
Petet
