Flowing Sand

A rivulet, after the rains draining sand into the sea. This is the water flowing over curves of probably clay.

Kind of an abstract is what I made walking along the rivulet.
6DII, 24-105

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Wow…like how dynamic yet soothing this image is. To me the RLC is distracting however.

This is a nice abstract. It a very unusual subject, and I’m not sure I would have guessed what it was without your explanation, which often helps with abstract images. I agree with @Mario_Cornacchione, this is kind of dynamic and soothing at the same.

My suggestion for tweaks relate to the potential for distractions in three of the corners. I would suggest cloning away the dark patch in the upper right, and the light band in the upper left. The dark shape in the lower right has a lot of visual weight, which for me competes with the main pattern in the center. I might consider a crop to 5x7 to minimize the impact of this dark shape. Here is a rework reflecting my comments.

Dynamic and soothing is right. A great blend of curving flow and rippling up-and-down motion.Excellent shot, Balan!