Foggy Morning Tree

[Bonnie_Lampley]

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Description

For more than two weeks in December, we had really thick fog - old fashioned Tule Fog all up and down the Central Valley of California, even up here in Redding. The view from a hill above the Sacramento River was beautiful. I was taken with this tree against the foggy background and the hint of the river below.

Specific Feedback

Did you read the far background as a river/water? I brought out a bit more of the faint reflection to show that.

I thought about going b&w, but I really liked the subtle hint of color.

Technical Details

iPhone 16 using Project Indigo in automatic mode. Anyone using P.I.?

Processed in ACR and PS; removed a couple strays poking in from the sides, brought out the reflection, and increased the contrast in the foreground (the latter two adjustments through dodging/burning lights/darks).

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[Diane_Miller]

Very nice!! The tree has a lovely shape and nice supporting surroundings. The water and reflections does come across on a close look, and I love the detail and the color palette!

It has been a foggy winter down here, too, with a lot of needed rain. I haven’t played with PI yet, but thanks for the reminder – I need to have a look!

[Michael_Lowe]

Yes I read the BG as water. That’s what drew me to the image. Very nice.