Forest scene

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Description

These trees are in a canyon where a spring-fed stream runs. I was hiking and looking for things to photograph.

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Is the color balance okay? I left it a little on the blue side intentionally.

Any other comments are welcome.

Technical Details

ISO 100, 187mm, f/16, 1/10th sec.


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I think the interplay of background and the subject is terrific. All that well-lit detail in the background should be distracting but that is not at all what happens. The BG branches and subtle colors seem like a textured paper on which the dark trees are painted. The branches on the right are a fine echo of the main tree.
You had many choices of luminosity and saturation; I am happy you settled on this calm treatment.
No niggles.

Thanks for the thoughtful comments, Dick.

Exactly. Most of the processing with this one consisted of small adjustments to keep the background “texture” consistent and unobstrusive.

The blue works, Don. It contrasts well with the nice orange leaves.

Yes - this is what is so appealing about these kinds of scenes. The “chaos” of small branches becomes texture.

All said above! The “background” is indeed texture – wonderful!! And the graceful shapes of the FG trees are a delight!

Thanks, Diane.

Don: Not as compelling for me as your earlier post but still frame filling fantastic. There’s a lot to look at and like. Good vision, great image. >=))>

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Don, the color balance works well for me. I love the very subtle blue tones in the background mixed with the warm fall colored leaves. I also like the detail falloff from front to rear where the background is rendered un-sharp against the sharper foreground trees. The composition is well done. You needed that smaller tree in the lower ight corner to balance this scene and I might even burn those branches just a little to more closely match the tree on the left. It’s funny because I brought this into light room to crop off the top of the image…why?..because I thought that curving branch in the upper left corner might be better off on the cutting floor. After I cropped it, I noticed that the curving branch on the upper right of the image no longer had a balancing partner and so I think the composition is better as is. Well done.

Hi Don, A fine companion piece to your previous trees. These are wonderful examples on how to celebrate the subtle luminosity of woodland. I really love the blend of orange leaves and the light blue/teal tones of the branches. So well seen and processed.

Bill, David, Guy, thanks for taking the time to comment.

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I really like the strong dark lines of the tree limbs in this photo. They’re graphic nature goes so well against that background pattern of those soft warm colours.