Frosted Leaves on Bark w/ Repost

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Noticed frost on the leaves on our cedar bark this morning. I do not take a lot of these kinds of photographs, but I always appreciate seeing them in the feed. As usual with my color work, I struggle trying not to oversaturate the image, and sometimes in the process, go too far in the other direction. But I feel by looking at the piece of frost-free bark in the upper part of the photo, it feels like the saturation is fine (the bark is rather bright in real life).

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Any and all.

Technical Details

Fujifilm GFX 50s II, 1/50, f/5.6, 101.8mm, GF 100-200 f/5.6

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Outstanding detail David. Your image is striking. The only minor suggestion I have is burning down the very bright leaves in the center.

Oh this is striking. I love frosty stuff like this so I couldn’t help but bring it into Photoshop for some tweaking -

First a big crop. All the attention should be on those central leaves so I eliminated everything else. Then I did a color cast adjustment because while the bark might have been that red, I found it didn’t suit the subject so toned it down. I also used a color mask for the aqua blue and brought down the saturation almost 100%. Then I put that into a stamped visible layer for some healing/cloning at the edges and painted some color on a bit of bark on the top. Last I balanced the saturation with two masks in the TK8 panel - one to tone down the most saturated bits and the other to bump up the least saturated. Hope you like it since it is truly a lovely shot that has so many ways it can be worked.

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This is wonderful - I love the details, textures, and of course the colour. That said, I really like Kristen’s take on it too. :slight_smile:

David, what a cool scene. I have tried and failed with this type of photography over and over. I think you got it. The colors are perfect and I feel the cold. Well done.

Kris’ crop sets the focus on the center leaves, but I also think it changes the while dynamics of the image. Both work fine in my opinion.

Very lovely capture. I like the color palette here and always love frosted leaves. I agree with Kristen’s suggestion about the crop. As it is, the photo seems a little cluttered. You really want the eye on the gorgeous cluster of leaves in the center.

Thank you for your feedback @Eva_McDermott @Tom_Nevesely @David_Bostock @Chris_Baird. It is greatly appreciated.

@_Kris and thank you for taking the time to fiddle with the image. I agree with your crop, but the colors feel a little bit washed out for my taste.

I went out this morning and used a tripod this time to try and get a sharper image. I also got closer so as to highlight the leaves in the middle. I had Kris’ adjustments in my mind as I worked on the colors, etc. In the end, I think this looks about where I envisioned this image in my head.

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Super! Glad you achieved an image you really like. That’s always so satisfying.

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David, that new one is terrific. Really sharp and a great comp too.

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I love this photo, David. I think the color balance might be a bit warm, but not sure what it actually looked like in real life either. I love the way you composed it.

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Thanks @Matt_Payne. Not sure if you saw the new pic I took the next morning? I put it in a post but now I’ve put it at the top with a “repost” moniker.

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I did, but only after I replied (haha).

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Wonderful image, and so nice to go back and re-work the scene!

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Nicely seen and photographed. The new version I like a lot.

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Thank you @Diane_Miller and @J_Fritz_Rumpf for your feedback!

I love the rework on this one. How cool is that when you get to go back out a second day and get the same scene with revisions in mind? I love those 3-4 central leaves. I might dodge that dark hole in the URC. This is so well seen.

David,

This is a striking composition and the frosted leaves and bark make for a great subject. While I like the crop and the toning down of the brightness, I still feel like something is amiss. I feel the color balance is just off. I think there is too much blue in the scene, and it lashing with the reds. Have you tried to warm it up just a bit?