Grasses of Crested Butte

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

In crested butte for wildflower season . These grasses were also scattered and prominent. I was entrigued by their flow and textures.

Technical Details

150mm f/11 1/6 sec iso 100

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Mario, Beautiful color tones in the grass. From my perspective, however, it is a very busy scene, a bit of chaos. Personally, I struggle with such scenes. If I may, I suggest two changes of a similar nature;
I would blur the outer edges on the color and a B&W version of the image. I know the B&W maybe sacrilegious to you because of the great colors, however, B&W brings out more contrast to isiolate the center of the grass, giving it a better subject / focus point. Just another perspective, I do appreciate your artistic vision.


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Wonderful image! The out-of-focus LLC bothers me, so the blurred edges suggested by Gary may help that, but I’m not sure.

Works great in color and black and white !!! The lines and sharp to soft image i really feels works great. Not a perfect world out there. Beautiful shot !!!

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THank you @Ronald_Murphy @gDan52 @Gill_Vanderlip for your comments and new versions Gary. I do like the B/W.

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