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Self Critique
I like the bold, vivid colors and textures and the story-telling aspect of the image (if indeed this bug does cause these stains on the leaves). I think the sharpness on the bug is pretty good as well.
I’d appreciate any suggestions on what could be improved.
Creative direction
Given that I had zero interest in bugs and insects until I got a macro lens in 2023, I’m amazed at how much I’ve grown to love photographing them. I am trying to convey their visual beauty, details, shapes, and textures, and show them in their environment. And I’m trying to do it in more of an artistic than a straightforward, documentary way.
Specific Feedback
I’d welcome any feedback on any aspect of the image.
I’ve started to use f/22 on my macro images recently–do you see any problems with diffraction or anything else w/this super narrow aperture?
I can’t believe I spotted this teeny-tiny bug! It was hiding under a leaf. I really liked the combination of the textures and details on the leaf and the bug.
Canan: Really good capture here and it is sharp where it needs to be. I shoot at f22 a lot and think all the handwringing over diffraction is optical snobbery in most cases. With today’s high quality lenses I can’t say that I’ve ever noticed it, especially on web sized images.
My suggestions would be to crop this a bit tighter to give the bug more prominence. Also the DOF is better behind it than ahead. Normally I would also crop so that the critter is not centered. Ideally in this scene I would place the bug on the lower left third and let it have room to walk ahead on the leaf. You could also just crop much tighter to fill the frame a bit more. >=))>
Canan, I was the say way about insects until I started shooting macro. It is like a whole other universe. I like the story being told if in fact the bug is the one doing it. Nice details in the bug and the leaf. I like what @Bill_Fach did with it, especially the more cropped in version.
Thanks, Bill. “Optical snobbery,” LOL! I’m glad I’m not the only one who thinks diffraction is not such a big issue. And thanks a lot for your suggestion–the crop does make sense & still shows both the bug and the details on the leaf.
And thanks for the critique