Ben, the curved, rounded ice edge does a good job of setting the stage for the color blobs in the water. The curved bright line coming in from the left adds nicely to the eye movement. I’m debating with myself about the bubbly ice along the bottom…it adds to the story about what and where this is, but it’s so different in texture from the rest. Try a crop from the bottom to see what you think.
Hi Ben, lots of interesting details in your photo. I think the crop worked well; removing just enough at the bottom to further highlight the “main show” but retaining some to show differences in color and texture, setting off the brighter ice, which look like teeth to me. The curvy lines on the left also add interest. A very well seen abstract.