In decay, the trunk of the fallen tree was slowly disguising by insects and mushrooms, it looked like sand, what attracts me was actually the color, and then the repetitive pattern.
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Olympus E-M1 markIII with 12-40mm f/2.8 Pro
with tripod and Kase magnetic C+PL
I like this - you can feel the decay/regeneration and the log makes a great background. The positioning of the mushrooms is nice too. I might be tempted to try to sharpen the image some more and suggest a little more contrast to highlight the mushrooms and bring out the lines. Nice shot!
Thanks Charles, much appreciated
Hi Henk –
I love these two little mushrooms, doing their job in helping decompose this wood. I think this photo succeeds as a storytelling image. The strong lines in the background contribute some abstract elements to the composition (is the background wood or is it stone?) but I think the subject is too clear to be considered a full abstract photo by my own definition. (I add this to my feedback not to be critical but just to add context since I am doing these critiques through the lens of abstracts in nature. For my own work, I would consider this more of a really small intimate scene instead of an abstract in nature.)
In terms of potential improvements, two things jump out at me. The first is a personal preference since I do see that you were attracted by the colors. I generally do not like warm-toned subjects and almost always try to tone down warm colors in my own photos. So, it this were mine and I loved the subject, I would take the photo but would likely present it in black and white, so that is what I did below.
The second thing is the left edge. It is heavy, different in terms of texture, and bright so it attracts a lot of attention (and it also looks like it is not sharp in terms of depth of field, which also brings attention to it). I would consider cropping it out or darkening it. In darkening it, the edge would serve as more of a frame in the margin instead of a compositional element that attracts attention. For my own work, I try to have things in the margin fade into the background and here, that edge stands out a lot to me. The right edge is also pretty bright but has less texture, so it isn’t quite as dominant. In that case, I would consider darkening the lighter tones. I have suggested some rough edits below.
Thank you so much for your detailed explanation and time you input, much appreciated.
With kind regards