In My World OF Fantasy

Image Critiques Weekly Challenge
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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

I was using a camera , which was converted into 790 nm IR range to photograph in the NY Botanical Gardens , when I spotted my wife walking into " wonderland".

Specific Feedback

your overall feeling of the image and the B&W conversion.

Technical Details

Sony body with a medium wide angle lens at f/8 1/60 sec

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Beautiful image, definitely a “wonderland”. I think some may not like the top dark area, but I think it sets off those amazing clouds. Perhaps the lower right dark areas could be lightened up a bit, so they don’t pull the eye. A tiny nit - that sign under the tree to the right of your wife could be “disappeared.”
Excellent work!

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A lovely “Wizard of Oz” sort of dreamy shot, with super contrasts. Lucky you relocated your wife at this moment! I do agree about removing the sign, as I find it too “undreamy”.