In Slower Motion

Critique Style Requested: In-depth

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Self Critique

The soothing with the crashing waves

Creative direction

Looking for that artistic look with impact

Specific Feedback

Whites a bit blown ?

Open to any suggestions really - somebody elses creative mind

Technical Details

1/15th of a second - with some panning

Description

Essentially trying out panning in slow motion

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I love the different directions the water is taking in this scene. It’s so dynamic and energetic. A real fury contained. White are probably blown in spots, but it’s not a literal translation of the scene so I don’t think it matters. It’s more an illustration in a sense. Nice catch and work to create the lines and action.

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Hi Karl,
wow, that looks fantastic. You can see the power of the wave. I really like the surreal effect of your panning. It looks like a drawing.
Last year I spent some time experimenting with that technique as well. It’s really fun.

I can’t see really blown out whites. I just downloaded your file and dialed back the exposure. There are beautiful textures everywhere… and some dust/water spots :wink:

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