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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

In this shot, a wave smashes into the rocks with astonishing power, embodying the raw, untamed force of nature. The water, caught in a moment of dynamic movement, curves and whips through the air, displaying a vibrant green hue against the deep blue sea. The explosion of spray highlights the sheer energy and intensity of the ocean’s power.

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Any feedback welcome

Technical Details

100 mm at ISO 2500 and 1⁄3200sec at ƒ/18

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Great shot and perfect SS to capture the dynamic power of nature. I think a crop also works well to further focus attention on the crashing wave.

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This wave is really powerful Saundie. I love the green water. It looks like it curled back on itself after it hit the rocks. As noted by @Michael_Lowe, you got the right SS to freeze the moment. I think Michael’s crop brings a bit more focus to the wave itself.

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Wave action always promises an original composition, never to be the same again. I agree with @Ed_Williams about the shape and color of the crashing wave. I do think the crop suggested by @Michael_Lowe emphasizes the power of the ocean. Thanks for sharing this beautiful scene with us.

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Thanks Barbara. Love the idea of never to be the same again! :+1:

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Thanks Ed appreciate your feedback! :pray:

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Thanks Michael, your crop works well! :+1: :pray: