Juvenile Sharp-shinned Hawk

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I was poking around in files from earlier this year and ran across a series of this hawk perched in a dead oak sapling I’d put up in the back yard. I’d processed (and I think, posted) one with it looking straight at the camera, but had never processed a profile, so I decided to do so. This is the result.

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What technical feedback would you like if any?

The face was shadowed in the raw file, so I did quite a bit of dodging and some luminosity adjustments to bring out the face and shoulder more-does it still look realistic? I also cloned out a couple of branches at the bottom and removed a twig on the left.

What artistic feedback would you like if any?

Anything.

Pertinent technical details or techniques:

7DII, Sigma 150-600 C @ 600 mm, hand held, f/8, 1/800, iso 1250, manual exposure. Processed in LR & PS CC. Cropped from a horizontal original to 2382 x 3096 before resizing. Taken at 4:19 pm on August 25th.

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Excellent detail, pose, head turn, and BG.

3

Looks good. Nice pose and great detail. Maybe remove the green spot above the head?

4

Excellent portrait of the young sharp-shinned.

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My type of shot–artistic and diagnostic. The BG is buttery smooth and goes well with the plumage oif the hawk. Well done…Jim

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This is simply superb, Dennis. The dodging on the face is excellent.