Killdeer Flight and Call

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Killdeer (Charadrius vociferus)

The Killdeer have returned to our local wetlands for mating and breeding. It’s so funny that they announce themselves wherever they are. I was lucky to be in position to catch this one with a background other than blue or gray sky…

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I like the position of the wings and that he’s calling. There’s a shadow from the right wing across the body, but I don’t think it’s too bad. What do you think?

I’m really pleased with the background and that my camera held focus on the bird.

Technical Details

Nikon Z8, 800mm, 1/2500 sec @ f/6.3, ISO 1100

Preprocessing in DXO PhotoLab, final processing in Capture One.

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Excellent, David. They’re always running around in their normal panic here, but I never seem to get them in the air. Interestingly, their favorite place in our neighborhood is the people with the board flat lawn that’s always closely mown. It must have the best bugs and worms.

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Thanks, Dennis. Yes, they are kind of clueless birds. Down here they often nest right next to or even on the walking paths. Then the areas need to be roped off to avoid disturbing them.

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Very nice capture! The bird is sharp with excellent tonal detail – I don’t mind the wing shadow at all. The BG is lovely but I wonder about bringing up the darks a bit to reduce contrast a little. Just an idle thought for a lovely image!

The few I see are very shy and always fly away from me.

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I like the pose and the overall sharpness of the subject. BG is nice and its darkness provides enough contrast to show off the subject…Jim

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@Diane_Miller, @Sandy_Richards-Brown, and @Jim_Zablotny thank you for the kind comments. Much appreciated.