Critique Style Requested: Initial Reaction
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I would just like to get some feedback about how you perceive this woman looking back at you. What is your sense of her?
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Image Description
This is the third in the series of La Calavera Catrina portraits I made at last fall’s La Dia de los Muertos celebration. This one is quite straight forward but, personally, I love it. There is a kindness and softness in her eyes that I find open and inviting. And, of course, there are the roses which perfectly frame her face. I am quite proud of the fact that even in the midst of the chaos and rush of doing this kind of street portrait, I had the awareness to orient her so as to get the nice catch light in her eyes. I also like the way the black paint around her eyes creates a kind of optical illusion making it seem as though she is looking out from behind a mask rather than having had it painted on her face.
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