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Description
On November 2nd I attended a wonderful celebration of Dia de los Muertos, (Day of the Dead) right in my neighbourhood here in Toronto. One of the central figures in this yearly celebration is La Calavera Catrina – The Elegant Skeleton Woman. At this particular celebration there were a number of “Las Catrinas” – part of a dance troupe – circulating before their performance, among the enormous crowd. Many people would ask them to pose for selfies or with their family. But I wanted to try my hand at portraits and see if I could capture their noble beauty and elegance. I approached five or six of these Catrinas and asked them if I could take their pictures. Of course, they were very happy to oblige. It was a bit of a challenge – I had to be fairly quick about it, plus I was shooting in low light (thank heavens for DxO Pure Raw!). But I didn’t just want these beautiful skulls staring back at my camera, so I started talking to them, regaling them with how beautiful they were in their glorious regalia – skulls adorned with roses, feathers, and jewels. And very quickly they started getting into character – in this image, for example, she has lifted her chin proudly and fearlessly, becoming to me, at least, the very essence of La Calavera Catrina. I can’t remember when I had more fun taking pictures.
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I’d love to have you share your impressions as you look at this portrait and whether or not it gives you any insight into who this archetype - La Calavera Catrina - might be.
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