Last Few Dew Drops

Image Critiques Macro/Close-up Critiques
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We have reached the end of the cold season, and dew has reduced a lot. Probably the last of the dew
Tried out a new comp, as this was seated among the dry grass, and the only approach was from the top…
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6D2, 180 Tamron, 36mm EXT, ISO800, F10, 1/25

Balan Vinod

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I like the composition of this, Balan. He still has quite a bit of dew on him. Nice details in the eyes. I think if this was mine, I would try toning down the yellowish stalk that he is on (right in front of him) as it seems to be drawing too much attention for my taste. I like the position of his wings. Very well done.

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Balan, the combination of dew on the wings and great details in the eyes looks great. Your choice of composition also works well, I especially like how it’s angled. I agree that some burning-in of the perch would let the DF get even more attention.

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Balan: Me three on toning down the brightness of the perch but everything else looks great. I like the comp and arrangement in teh frame and your DOF choice. Puzzled a bit about the stuff on the right eye. Superb capture. >=))>

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Very nice image Balan! i like the BG color and your POF is just right. But yes, you could town down the perch a bit.