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Description
One of these days I’ll think to take a smaller lens along with me when I’m out doing bird photography. But the long lens did give me a nice blurred background
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Any thoughts appreciated.
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Canon R5; 100-500 with 1.4 TC at 420 mm; 1/1000 at f8, -1 2/3 EV; ISO 125
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Hey, it works. I like the composition here, Allan, despite all those non-natives. It looks to me like the whites in the daisy could come up a bit. The petals are looking a bit gray on my monitor.
The repost hit the bullseye. That daisy really pops out now in the vibrant tangle. Reminds me of a meadow or prairie and all the life those support. The long lens did a nice job of compressing the scene as well as blurring the background. I really like the bright light and the warm greens of the background. When I went out yesterday I used my medium telephoto for almost everything as I like what it does with small scenes. Very occasionally I do the same with the really long lens, too.
Allen: Nice find and your long lens worked really well. On my wildflower forays in the Spring I like to look for scenes like this. Your repost made an already fine image even better. Nicely done. >=))>
