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Description
Looking for birds in the Southern delta of the Netherlands, I happened upon these wings emerging from the late afternoon ground mist. I thought there was a lot of grace there. I tried to compose so as not to cut off any of the wings, which was more complicated than I imagined.
Specific Feedback
My main questions are about the composition. I could have positioned the windmills higher up in the picture to emphasise the mist more. But then I would also have included more of the electrical masts. Attempts at removing these with AI remove in LR yielded variable success, so I chose to let their tips be in the picture. Should I try more?
Technical Details
Canon Canon EOS R6
ƒ/14
1/125
354 mm (RF 200-800mm)
250 ISO
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This is a very elegant composition to me, Xavier. I like the effect of the mist in creating a high key look and providing an ethereal feel in the image. I noticed while composing this that there was a banner with the file information covering up a bit of the bottom which included both of the power line towers and it looked quite good that way as well. I wonder also if the one bright blade that managed to escape the frame could be misted over a bit in processing.
VERY nice!! Well seen and composed! I don’t think I would want to crop more from the bottom, but the objects there would be easy to clone out. Just zoom way in with a very small brush. Sometimes the older methods work better than the new stuff. (But that is a PS thing – if you only use LR it could be a lot more challenging.)
This image just came up to my attention. Way To cool !!!The Lines and the Tone of this image is really good. To my eye there is a sharpness and softness that really works. Outstanding !!!
