More Joy

[Bill_Fach]

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Description

Joy opened up overnight and I took a number of shots from the front but I was more enamored with the back side. Tomorrow I expect to see the middle bud bloom so I’m looking forward to the trio. >=))>

Specific Feedback

Same ivy wall as the earlier shot as the BG. There was a touch more light on it today so I subdued it a bit in post processing. Distracting?

Technical Details

Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II @ 188mm
ISO 400, 1/100 @ f8, 13 shot stack in Helicon Focus

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[Jim_Zablotny]

Looking pretty good. Exposure is spot on and I like the tilted symmetry as well. The soft lighting works very and I’m expecting the other side of the flowers very soon…Jim

[Dennis_Plank]

I like it and I agree that this is a really cool view with so much texture to show off. Great choice and your usual excellent work, Bill.