Mumble Jumble

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Image Description

I had just returned from a Freeman Patterson, Andre Gallant workshop in St. Martins and decided to try out a combination of techniques. This is a combination ICM, Multiple Exposure image of my neighbor’s flowering bushes.

Feedback Requests

Any and all comments welcomed.

Pertinent Technical Details

Camera: Canon EOS R5. Lens: Canon RF24-105mm F4 L IS USM, 4 exposures at 85.0 mm. f/22 for 1/4 sec. ISO 100. Edited in Camera Raw and Photoshop

Robert: Interesting textures for sure and a very artistic presentation. For me the yellow overpowers the comp a bit and since it’s the brightest part of the image it wants to trap my eye there. A pretty aggressive crop from the right eliminating about half of the yellow makes this a more comfortable image for me. Back to you. >=))>

Thank you, Bill. I tried 2 ideas. Mumble Jumble 3 is the crop you suggested and I also made the upper left corner a bit brighter to sort of balance the lower right. Mumble Jumble 3 I decreased the brightness a bit. Bob


Bob: I like what you did with the square crop. Works better for me that way along with your tonal adjustments. :+1: :+1:>=))>

I’m leaning a little bit that way as well, especially for this type of image. Thank you, Bob Engle