Muskrat Lunch

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Ah, sorry for giving you ear cancer with that song, but I couldn’t help it. And I don’t really want critique that badly, but I thought this was a funny image. Certainly not in league with any wildcats or elephants, but amusing.

I was heading back to the boat launch, very lazily paddling and just taking my time when I saw what I thought was some crazy stump or branch out in the water and went in for a closer look. Turned out to be a muskrat feeding in what I think was deep water. Could be there is something it’s standing on, but I don’t think so. It would dive and come up in slightly different places and nibble on whatever it found. It hardly ever opened its eyes and that tail is just bonkers. I’ve never encountered one in deep water without any protective reeds or other vegetation. Weirdo rodents.

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Handheld in a strong breeze.

Cropped and basic edits in Lr. Brought up the exposure because I screwed it up in camera. Added some texture and sharpening. Not much else.


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Kris: Is that really his tail or a mini Orca stalking :wink:? Cool story and as always I’m envious of your kayaking adventures. Nicely done. >=))>

Cool capture with good detail and tonalities! It does look like an interesting find. Definitely has that uber-rodent vibe. It seems not to mind your presence – bad eyesight?

Thanks @Bill_Fach & @Diane_Miller - they are odd little critters for sure. I’m not sure how aware it was of me at all. I’d move when it dove and didn’t paddle with much action or noise. Not sure.