Nibbling Fawn

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Description

Here’s a recent pose I got in our backyard. There’s an extra big crowd of fawns right now. Always fun to see, and photograph.

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BG too busy?

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Z9, 180-600mm, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, 1/1000th, f 8.5, 450mm, ISO 11400, cropped to 8256 x 5504.

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Who doesn’t love a picture of a fawn? This one works well for me with a very nice pose and low camera angle. Wonderful detail! I would consider toning down the brightest part on the mid-ground behind him. And maybe darken the OOF leaves at the bottom? But a wonderful capture in any case!

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Wonderful composition, thanks for sharing. I know we can not always choose our backgrounds when the opportunity presents itself. I would remove the branches in the image as best you could. I did a quick edit.

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