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Description
Night comes to an end
A feast again every day
The morning sunlight
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Made on a long walk yesterday.
On a moment we were resting on a fallen tree . And then suddenly saw this light and dak feast.
I think with a nice result. Hope you like it.
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F5.6, 1/100, iso 320, 24-120 at120mm
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Yes to the light! Always consider cropping. It is not a sin. If you can, try lightening the shadow to the left and below for more detail, otherwise, crop. Also, what is the most important and interesting part of the frame? The center, or the area to the right? The light passing through the leaves?
Hi Ben,
This woodland scene has a very nice mix of light and shadow that illustrates your haiku perfectly. The two avenues of light give the viewer a choice about which direction to travel; the path straight ahead or veer towards the right. Kind of like life’s choices I guess. My only suggestion would be to remove what looks like an OOF stick standing straight up along the bottom edge about 1/5th of the way in from the LRC. Nicely done.
Bill, thank you for your comment.To me it’s about the dark and light in the upcoming morning. As I say in my description (Haiku). By cropping the whole story has gone.
Ed, thanks for your words.You are so right about that oof stick as you call it. I made a rework and did some more cleaning and also took out the tree in the middle.
