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Wanaka Lake, South Island, NZ
Australasian Southern Crested Grebe (Pūteketeke)
The Australasian Southern Crested Grebe occurs only in New Zealand and Australia but it is threatened in both countries, and the New Zealand population probably numbers fewer than 1000 birds.
Southern crested grebe / pūteketeke are found on fewer than 100 lakes and lagoons of the South Island, mostly in Canterbury and Otago. They were once found in the North Island as well, but are now extinct there. This species is also found in small numbers in parts of Australia where it is known as the Australasian crested grebe.
On Wanaka Lake, there have been concerted efforts to conserve and breed the grebes back from near-extinction.
Also called pūteketeke or kāmana in Te Reo Māori, they have some spectacular behaviours. Although grebes can fly, this is rarely seen by people. It is likely that grebes fly mostly at night. The name “pūteketeke” comes from the similarity of the bird’s black head crest to the tikitiki topknot hairstyle worn by Māori men of rank.
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Sony A1 II
200-600 + TC 1.4
Date Taken: 2025-04-12 14:34:26
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 2000
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
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