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Description
There are some wonderful dilapidated towns around the borders of Death Valley that are worth exploring. I came across an abandoned gas station whose walls were pealing.
Specific Feedback
How does the 2-toned composition strike you?
Technical Details
GFX50R, 45-100, f/11
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Igor, The image says it all about the dilapidated
( new word to me) state by the shapes and colors of the place. I can imagine how it looks over there.
A work of art to me !!
I saw this on my smallish tablet last night Igor, but I’m glad I waited until I was on a computer with a real screen to comment. The geometry of the cracks and peeled areas is wonderful. On the tablet, the two-toned looked a little odd, but on the computer the subtle brown-blue mix in the upper 2/3 of the image makes the blue in the bottom 1/3 work very well. An excellent image.
Yeah, the blue is a wee bit too strong at the bottom, It’s more obvious in the print. Rats. Haven’t had an easy print all morning. Needs a clockwise title too.
As I scrolled through the thumbnails and the top of this came into view, I knew it was yours. It was the subtle color palette. I agree with Dennis that the geometry of the cracks are great. The blue is a bit too blue, but the brown/blue combo is super.
Thank you for your comments. I don’t know how I feel about this one. It’s kind of phlegmatic, but I suppose it’s not meant to be a high impact image so it’s all right.
