The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
From a recent trip to Mount Ranier National Park. The Fall colors were different than what I’m used to in East Coast forests, but they were quite beautiful
Specific Feedback
Any feedback welcome
Technical Details
Sony A7riv with a Tamron 20-40 f/2.8 at 30 mm f/16. Some basic processing in Lightroom
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Will, you found a beautiful scene here. The subtle colours are quite striking. I’m wondering if you could tease a little more colour from that gray sky? I see a touch of pink in there.
Dodging the gray sand on the mountain to brighten it a bit would improve this, as well.
Very nice!
@SandyR-B , thanks for your suggestions. I’ve tried them out. There was pink in the sky, but it was mostly a little above my original crop, so I’ve tried a slightly taller version to show this. I did brighten the sand a little. I’m kind of on the fence about whether this part of the picture should be made more or less prominent.
Will, somehow I missed this one. The colors in the foreground ridge are both subtle and very nice. Then you’ve got a fine mix of green/yellow in the middle ground. The hint of pink in the sky adds more interest and a new color. My one thought is to burn-in slightly the white area in the central sky, but that’s a minor nit on a fine photo. The repost lets the sky play a stronger role, which I like.
