Queen of Her Territory

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Great moment coming across this beautiful leopard patrolling her territory. I like including the vegetation. Do you find it distracting?

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Nikon Z9, Nikkor Z 400mm f/2.8 TC VR S
1/1000 sec. at f/4.0, ISO 140, 560 mm
Topaz AI, Lightroom Classic, minor adjustments to highlights, shadows, whites, blacks


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I hope you are in a safe place when you took this. Nice walking pose. Good color and detail. I like it

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Thx @David_Schoen Yes! Vehicle. Had a great angle and lens! :wink:

Great shot, quite scary actually. I like the vegetation and the play of light and shadow. The only thing I might try to alter is the leopard’s left eye. I just feel that if it were as piercing as the right eye, this might add to the effect a bit. But perhaps it does look more sinister as is!

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Marvelous image! Sinister, indeed!
I like the vegetation and feel it adds a nice element of interest, without distracting from this magnificent cat.
I agree with cleaning up it’s left eye a bit to match the right. That stare deserves two bright eyes!
Excellent..

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Thank you @Sandy_Richards-Brown and @Mike_Friel I love how others see things you don’t! Will be messing with that eye now!! :blush:

A beautiful image with great eye contact !
I would like to see the frame more rectangular and I may burn the bright areas on the RHS.
Agree, adjusting the left eye would help.

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Thank you @JRajput . Appreciate it!

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The leopard has given you a powerful, predatory strut with intense eyes looking straight at you, and your composition is wonderful; just centred enough and the grasses frame the animal nicely.

I wonder if raising the shadows just a tiny bit on the fore legs would add anything?

This is such a beautiful, moody image, Christine. Love it!

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Thank you @glennie !

Christine: a wonderful image of this beautiful female made even better by the direct eye contact. An alternative presentation would be to burn the very bright areas that surround the leopard. It’s a wall hanger.

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Thank you @Richard_Sandor . Will try that!!

I think you nailed it. The light on her face is sweet. I would suggest burning in the bright area in the upper right corner which drags my eye away from the leopard.

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Thank you @Paul_Hetzel .