Raindrops

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Description

Raindrops on our glass patio table top

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does this hold enough interest?

Technical Details

Sony A1
90mm macro
F8
1/150
Iso 800
Matrix metering
Manual
Processed with PS 2025 + DxO Pure Raw


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Interesting experiment, Sandy. It doesn’t really work for my taste. It seems a little out of focus for some reason which makes me keep trying to focus my eyes without success, like I’m trying to find something that just isn’t there. It seems like it should work and I’m not sure why it isn’t. I wonder what would happen if one were to take the image at a bit of an angle and focus stack it to give the drops a bit more of a 3-d feel?

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That’s kinda what I thought, so many thanks for the honest assessment! One of my goals for '25 is to learn to focus stack. I’ve been too lazy so far.

Focus stacking is pretty straight forward these days, Sandy. You can get really nit picky about it, but for the most part the software does it all for you.

Sandy, I have to agree with @Dennis_Plank on this one. However, I also have to agree with you that I need to make 2025 the year to learn focus stacking. Hopefully I will be healthy and have the time and desire to do that. I have been amazed at some of the macro shots on here where people have used focus stacking.

So let’s make a resolution! Also for me is improving landscape techniques and learning new abstract techniques.

That sounds good.

Sandy, this does feel a bit soft, but that’s likely to be the high contrast and the optics of the drops. As presented, I wonder about going b&w since there very little color. The larger drops are nicely distributed through the frame. One of the fun things about droplet is their lensing capacity, something under the table would let that show and help differentiate between the different size drops.