The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I observed the hawk nest near my neighborhood lake boat dock this morning. I think the adults are trying to get the youngster to branch out from the nest as they were doing a lot of squawking and I saw no feeding being done.
Specific Feedback
Any comments appreciated.
I reduced the brightness of the sky a good bit but it is still quite bright.
Technical Details
Canon R7, 200-800mm, handheld
ISO 4000, f9, 1/800s
The detail in all three is excellent, Allen. Hard to pick a favorite, but I like the squawking pose in the first and trees framing the hawk in the thrid.
Allen, the details in the birds in all three look great and their actions keep interest on the birds. The sky seems reasonable to me. I get a chuckle out of #2 with the birds looking in opposite directions from each side of the branch. The tight look in #3 shows of the hawks feathers very well.
Nice photographs! I really like the first and third photographs. The expression of the first is really nice. You mention that you decreased the brightness in the sky… IMO it will be tough to bring it down further as you have some white clouds in there. Maybe boost the contrast of the birds helping in isolating from the sky and the tree branches which are primarily the same colors of the birds.
