The face and eye are incredible, David. However, the position of the bird, low in the frame, doesn’t seem to work for me as a composition. If it were higher and the wings cut off more, I think it would work better. It’s really a pain when you get detail this good, but the position in the frame just doesn’t want to work.
Bird portraits are tough to pull off, especially for a hawk. You could do a quarter of the frame as an experimental crop, but it won’t leave you with enough pixels. The head detail is amazing…Jim
Very interesting close up with great detail David, I would crop all of the area on the right that includes sky, still not perfect but it would focus more attention on the face I think.