Ian, I much prefer the second image with a clear view of the structure. The placement there between the rhododendrons and the very tall tree on the right is perfect…
The only change for me would be to work on the overall toning on the second image to make it darker like the first image…
Ian,
I also prefer the second composition even though the pink is actually a nice touch of color for the image. I agree about the darkening to make the second to look more like the first.
“Number 2”…tho I think you can do a lot better.
On a related topic…I think you are someone who would make grand use of a tilt-shift lens.
TY for Post