At first glance, I tried to imagine the shutter speed required to freeze those wings, probably a five digit number. Then I looked at the technical details and discovered that you had used flashes, in the plural, no fewer than five of them. For an amateur photographer like me, who considers one flash and a reflector to be the absolute pinnacle of sophistication, such a setup looks downright Byzantine. I can only salute a technical feat whose every subtlety escapes me, since it sits so far beyond my modest understanding of flash work. This kind of arrangement belongs in a studio, and the bird here is being treated like a celebrity. All that is missing is the makeup artist, the stylist, and possibly the agent making sure the contract is being respected.
On the question of the flower to bird ratio: the current balance works precisely because the flower occupies roughly a third of the frame. More flower and the bird becomes an accessory. Less flower and it hovers in empty space with nowhere in particular to go. The current proportion gives it something to aim at, a reason to be there. On top of that, the bird is tiny, and the presence of the flower offers a quite useful naturalistic scale.
What also strikes me in this technically formidable image is that it shows us a painting invisible to the naked eye. No witness has ever seen the hummingbird exactly like this. The image is an honest forgery, a truth reconstructed from milliseconds borrowed from time itself. Every photograph is, of course, a construction. The simple act of framing already extracts a slice of reality. But here you push the slider quite a bit further, and that raises some genuinely interesting questions about the very nature of our craft.
Finally there is the eye, a single black pearl set on the side of the head with its catchlight placed exactly where it should be. Without that eye the bird would be nothing more than a beautiful piece of precision machinery. With it, it becomes a creature endowed with intention. The gaze is what separates the machine from the living. A single pupil is enough to tip an object over into the animal kingdom. A strange little contract is signed between the eye and the soul: one well placed black dot returning a small spark is all it takes for us to grant the thing the benefit of being alive.
Add to that the millimetric finesse of the plumage, each barb perfectly separated from its neighbor, each iridescent green reflection caught in flight. Technology has captured what no human eye will ever witness directly, a hummingbird frozen on the threshold between two wing beats.
And that, I think, is the real pleasure of this kind of image, the fascination of the invisible revealed. There is a slightly dizzying joy in finally seeing what nature had always kept from us by simply going too fast. The hummingbird lives in a temporal dimension that is not ours. Its wings beat at a tempo our retina cannot possibly keep up with. Photography suddenly offers us what our biology has been politely refusing us since the dawn of vision.
The feeling is very close to what one experiences in front of microscope shots: the same surprise, the same small cognitive jolt of seeing a grain of pollen as a tiny sun, of seeing a fly as an articulated cathedral, of seeing a hummingbird as a jewel suspended on a motionless heartbeat. All these images share the same secret: they do not show us nature. They show us a nature we had never been granted access to.
And there is something deeply human in this desire. We want to see what we are not allowed to see. We want to slow time down. We want things to hold still long enough for us to finally, properly look at them. Technical photography answers this ancient longing. It is our microscope pointed at the living world, our small way of granting ourselves the luxury of contemplating what would otherwise rush past our senses. Our eyes are, after all, fairly lazy instruments. Photography compensates for their shameful sluggishness with remarkable politeness.