Ruby-throated Hummingbird

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Description

Taking a short break from Louisiana photos…
Our ruby-throated hummingbirds returned to the southeast last month and I was able to do some set up photography a couple of days ago. The top flower is catmint and the flower in the second image is scarlet honeysuckle.

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One thing I’m wondering about is the amount of flower to include in these photos. Enough to show off the flower but not make the bird too small in the frame. Any thought on that?

Technical Details

Canon R7, 200-800 lens, tripod, five flash set up @1/8 power
ISO 200, 1/250s, f22
I applied sugar water to the blooms.

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Allen Sparks Thursday, May 14 at 5:23 AM
Specific FeedbackOne thing I’m wondering about is the amount of flower to include in these photos. Enough to show off the flower but not make the bird too small in the frame. Any thought on that?

Not sure how you intend to increase flower size without also increasing the bird size, unless these are composites? Are they composites?
They do look like illustrations.

Regards,
GEGJr

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Hi George, these are not composites. I could crop into the flower more to increase bird size in frame or include more of the flower which would decrease the bird’s size as part of the final image.
I’m not sure what you mean by these looking like illustrations. I just used basic editing and nothing very severe.

Both images are excellent, Allen. I tend to lean toward providing quite a bit of room for hummingbirds because they’re so small in nature. I tend to think in terms of prints where a large print of a hummingbird looks a bit strange if it’s too large in the frame. So for these two, I wouldn’t mind seeing more of the catmint bloom head. The Honeysuckle looks about right, though I’d be tempted to tilt the whole thing a bit clockwise.

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Im not very educated on electronic processing so I don’t understand how you can make one object in an image look larger without making the other look larger too. I know how to crop and know what it does but I’ve only cropped a whole image not an object in an image. But no worries please don’t try to explain.
The reason I ask if they’re composites is because you mentioned cropping into the flower or bird to make one larger than the other and because your background is so smooth. Thats something I’m used to achieving when I shot human portraits in a studio but never seen it done in wildlife unless background was swapped out electronically.
I’m an old timer so excuse my lack.of knowledge about electronic post processing.
Rrgards

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Hi Allen,

The crops look good to me. In the first image, I would be inclined to show a bit of stem as the flower itself feels squeezed.

The second image is absolutely fantastic. I don’t typically comment on bird photographs as I’m not birder and not well versed in photographing them. Of course, composition and impact are another thing altogether, and this one caught my eye immediately.

I love the way the stem of the flower almost disappears into the background, which makes the honeysuckle look as though it is floating in the air just as the hummingbird is.

ML

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Allen, both shots show off the hummer and their food source well. The details are great. I think you’ve got the magnification and positioning just right.

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Hi Allen,
I like the fine details of the humming bird in the close up. What a colorful and fast birds they are. Both images looks good if the intension was to keep the focus only on the birds activity (I am new to critic but just saying my thoughts out).

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At first glance, I tried to imagine the shutter speed required to freeze those wings, probably a five digit number. Then I looked at the technical details and discovered that you had used flashes, in the plural, no fewer than five of them. For an amateur photographer like me, who considers one flash and a reflector to be the absolute pinnacle of sophistication, such a setup looks downright Byzantine. I can only salute a technical feat whose every subtlety escapes me, since it sits so far beyond my modest understanding of flash work. This kind of arrangement belongs in a studio, and the bird here is being treated like a celebrity. All that is missing is the makeup artist, the stylist, and possibly the agent making sure the contract is being respected.

On the question of the flower to bird ratio: the current balance works precisely because the flower occupies roughly a third of the frame. More flower and the bird becomes an accessory. Less flower and it hovers in empty space with nowhere in particular to go. The current proportion gives it something to aim at, a reason to be there. On top of that, the bird is tiny, and the presence of the flower offers a quite useful naturalistic scale.

What also strikes me in this technically formidable image is that it shows us a painting invisible to the naked eye. No witness has ever seen the hummingbird exactly like this. The image is an honest forgery, a truth reconstructed from milliseconds borrowed from time itself. Every photograph is, of course, a construction. The simple act of framing already extracts a slice of reality. But here you push the slider quite a bit further, and that raises some genuinely interesting questions about the very nature of our craft.

Finally there is the eye, a single black pearl set on the side of the head with its catchlight placed exactly where it should be. Without that eye the bird would be nothing more than a beautiful piece of precision machinery. With it, it becomes a creature endowed with intention. The gaze is what separates the machine from the living. A single pupil is enough to tip an object over into the animal kingdom. A strange little contract is signed between the eye and the soul: one well placed black dot returning a small spark is all it takes for us to grant the thing the benefit of being alive.

Add to that the millimetric finesse of the plumage, each barb perfectly separated from its neighbor, each iridescent green reflection caught in flight. Technology has captured what no human eye will ever witness directly, a hummingbird frozen on the threshold between two wing beats.

And that, I think, is the real pleasure of this kind of image, the fascination of the invisible revealed. There is a slightly dizzying joy in finally seeing what nature had always kept from us by simply going too fast. The hummingbird lives in a temporal dimension that is not ours. Its wings beat at a tempo our retina cannot possibly keep up with. Photography suddenly offers us what our biology has been politely refusing us since the dawn of vision.

The feeling is very close to what one experiences in front of microscope shots: the same surprise, the same small cognitive jolt of seeing a grain of pollen as a tiny sun, of seeing a fly as an articulated cathedral, of seeing a hummingbird as a jewel suspended on a motionless heartbeat. All these images share the same secret: they do not show us nature. They show us a nature we had never been granted access to.

And there is something deeply human in this desire. We want to see what we are not allowed to see. We want to slow time down. We want things to hold still long enough for us to finally, properly look at them. Technical photography answers this ancient longing. It is our microscope pointed at the living world, our small way of granting ourselves the luxury of contemplating what would otherwise rush past our senses. Our eyes are, after all, fairly lazy instruments. Photography compensates for their shameful sluggishness with remarkable politeness.

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I prefer to have a little extra room for the hummingbird. But these are OK as presented. I agree with Dennis in that extra room is necessary for wall hanging prints of these hummers. Colors and lighting are spot on. Very nice photos…Jim

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Hi Sebastien, thank you for the thoughtful reply. Hummingbirds definitely have a hidden beauty which can be revealed with our photography.

Both are excellent. My preference would be to see a bit less flower in each. I would also use the shadow/highlight in Lightroom and bring up the shadows just a bit on the hummer in both images.

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Thank you for the comments everyone! I processed three more hummingbird images from my shoot the other evening. I thought I’d share here to show different cropping choices and wing position. I don’t think there is one right answer on the cropping as much depends on personal taste and what the photographer is after in that particular image. Please see below.

In this image, I included more of the catmint flower. I didn’t have the stem to show unfortunately. Since this is more of a pano crop, the flower and bird both look a good bit larger on my rectangular screen.

This next image has the honeysuckle flower cropped in more slightly showing only one leaf on the left.

This last image just shows a different wing position (forward) which I also enjoy viewing.

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These are so great, Allen. Our little guys are back, too, and my husband and I watched a male perched in an oak tree having a preening session. Just watched with binocs, no pics, but it was a nice moment. Once I get some annuals and the furniture on the deck, maybe I can try for some as nice as yours. Of course I don’t have your sweet flash set up, but I may try some fill with my single unit. Do they even notice it? Just curious as I’m so hesitant to use flash with birds.

Hi Kris. Thanks. I haven’t noticed much reaction to the flash. More reaction when I move my hands to reach the camera. Still minimal though.
Great you have these to observe in your area also.

Thanks for the info. Maybe I’ll give it a try for when they are more backlit. If it ever stops being cold and rainy, I’ll get things organized.

Hi allen
I think you set a good balance between the flower and the bird. Nice work
Peter

I like these wide presentations, Allen. they work quite nicely to balance the flower and bird.

Ain’t nature grand!