Ta-Da! +Rework

Rework

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

You can almost hear the “Ta-Da!” as the cormorant showcases its freshly preened plumage. It’s a spontaneous display of cleanliness and charm, with the sea sparkling in agreement behind it.

Specific Feedback

Any feedback welcome.

Technical Details

325 mm at ISO 800 and 1⁄1000sec at ƒ/10

Nice image Saundie. A fine pose with the spread wings and the plumage that appears to be really wet. Nice rocky perch with the sea behind. Techs look good to have needed DOF and catch a sharp image of the bird. I would consider taking out the dark area on the right in the sea. It draws my eye without adding to the image IMO. Nice frame.

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Great pose and the plumage really shows well.

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Thanks Allen appreciate the feedback, I will get rid of that dark rock. :+1:

Thanks Allen! :pray:

Great typical Cormorant pose, Saundie. I envy you your pied cormorants-the white adds some great conrast. I agree with @Allen_Sparks about the water rock.

@Allen_Sparks @Allen_Brooks @Dennis_Plank

Thanks for the feedback, the rock is removed, much better! :+1:

This is such a cute bird and great pose to catch Saundie. I loved the first one, but the rework is even better. CUTE, CUTE, CUTE!

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Thanks Ed, certainly is a CUTE bird! :pray: