Thirsty Kids

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We seem to have an extra crop of new fawns here lately. Here are some twins in our backyard getting a birdbath drink.

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I looked at different crops and ended up liking this tight pose the best. Too tight? What say you?

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Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, 1/1000th, f 8.5, 680mm, ISO 5600, cropped to 7353 x 5373.

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That’s some serious cuteness! I think the crop works nicely. You got nice highlights in the fawn’s eyes, and the water drops on their mouths, which is a nice bonus. You might consider dealing with some of the bright spots in the BG, though. Nicely done, Dave.
-P

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I’d kind of like to see the stubby little tail on the front fawn, Dave. However this frame does minimize the bright background.