This Sonwy was having a tuff time getting started, on a very over-cast day

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The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

This is from the same day as my last post. I let the Zodiac drift into a canal inlet and photographed the Snowy Egret for about 5 minutes. In the second shot, the wind had picked up, and that also added to the soft look of this shot.

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Peter

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Technical Details

Z8, Nikon 180-600mm & 1.4ext, f9, +.7EV, 660mm, 1/2000, ISO 900, and cropped and processed in DXO PhotoLab 9.

Two very beautiful images, Peter, with the second being my favorite for the softness created by the breeze in the plumage. It also happens to be one of my favorite preening poses for this kind of bird. It’s interesting that the high contrast between the black legs and the background tend to create after images of the legs in the background as my eyes move around the image-a bit disconcerting at first.

Hi Peter, the soft and airy feel of these images create an ethereal mood to me. I prefer the second image as well for the sweeping look of the pose.

Hi Dennis & Allen

Thank you for the comments. You are a witness to DXO PhotoLab 9’s best effect with the retouching tool. There was a rather dark and out-of-focus cloud just off the log and behind the right leg of the snowy.

Peter

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I’ve heard great things about version 9 from a couple of people in our camera club.

Both are beautiful shots. I love the details in the bird and the log, and the muted colors. The second one shows more action and details may be more interesting to bird enthusiasts. I’d maybe play around with white balance–the bird seems to be just a little too much on the cold side.

And I’m glad to see I’m not the only photographer on the planet who is not using Lightroom. Hello, fellow Photolab user!

Hi Dennis & Canan Karatekin

Thank you for the comments. I did swing the color balance on the Snowy from 5028 to 5228. The overall ability to control image quality, noise & masking, make DXO PhotoLab 9 a great product. The retouching tool is not a strong point. Not paying a monthly fee is also a plus.

Peter