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A herd of elephants, bathed in golden light, makes its way across the grasslands of Corbett National Park (India).
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Very interesting formation of elephants and Myna adds to it !
You may crop some of the foreground and you may experiment with ‘white balance’ here, I find it too yellow.
The line-up here looks great Sandipan. I think that your work on the colour-balance has improved the overall image.
How about taking the crop a bit further and lose a bit more from top and bottom to give a 16:9 ratio (panoramic)
@Ryan_H Hi Ryan. I like your suggestion. In fact, while processing the original image, I was thinking about trying a pano crop to put more emphasis on the formation of the elephants. Here’s the updated version.
